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Excellent writing and readable. Loved it
 Tracie Reeves Owen
 
 A Must Read! Gives you a Lift from the chaos of our day!
 Tracie Reeves Owen
  
  Saga of Bazor The Hunt
  3.0 out of 5 stars Four-star story needing a bit of polish
Reviewed in the United Kingdom on 4 October 2022
In the first part of The Hunt, Lisa is the innocent victim of two competing cities who are both after a module that is hidden inside her. Chased by a maniac, the pace is mainly fast paced, the content dark. With a fun twist it’s an interesting read. The second half of the story is a sweet story about a lost boy and the journey to find his identity and parents. The story ties up well, but there is a clear thread for the next book.

The main characters, Lisa and Rafe, are likeable. Given that the book is set in 2017, I found some of the content a little dated - ladies doing the cooking, sewing, men in charge; dialogues at times were unnaturally formal and a little cheesy.

I liked the world-building on the planet of Bazor. The animals are very creative - I particularly liked the Kandogs - and the copper sky is a nice touch. The passageways between the different planets are well done. I liked the subtle differences in the people (imagine not having to give birth and having a baby in a pouch instead ??). It isn’t over-complicated, but I could picture it.

The aspect I found difficult is the editing. There are a lot of typos, punctuation and formatting errors and overuse of dialogue tags which frequently pulled me out of the story and made me re-read sentences.

Overall, it is an interesting read. I would rate it a solid 4* after a good edit. It would appeal to those wanting to read an easy-to-follow action packed story.
  
 E.K. (Goodreads Author)
  
  Experiences in Fishing
  This short story will make you smile as the writer does a good job of injecting humor and detailing every aspect of her experience.
  Darryl Breland(Goodreads Author)

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